"Andrew was dead-on with his editing and critique. He approached this as if he was on the admissions committee, and he is clearly quite skilled as an advisor and editor. He was complimentary where appropriate, and he was careful not to disparage my draft. Best of all, the quality, structure and focus of my essays is much improved. Many thanks for a job well done."
"I was impressed with the quality of the edits and the feedback Andrew provided. He's obviously very professional. My son's strengths are in math and science, and writing these essays has been the hardest part for him. He let out a big sigh of relief when the revised essays came back this evening. We'll use your service for the other college applications which require different essays. We're so glad we found you!!"
"Just wanted to let you know that I just got into Harvard! I am so excited! I wanted to thank you for all your support and assistance throughout this process. You were a huge factor in my success."
"Thank you so much for these amazing edits! My son was thrilled to see your feedback, and he printed out the email so he could take it to school and read it carefully. Your feedback and changes really polished these essays, and your insight into how admissions directors will experience reading them is very appreciated. As a parent, having the advice of an objective professional is extremely helpful. You'll be hearing from us again this week as we tackle the next application."
"This is the third editing service I have used, and Andy Benton is the best I have ever worked with. Thanks so much for your excellent work!"
"Andy, I would like to thank you for your excellent work and inform you I was selected to attend my first choice of graduate schools. Your service is invaluable! Thanks for the help."
"I knew my essay needed improvement, but I didn't know where. It was very helpful to understand what and why. I enjoyed the collaborative process, and I know my next essay will be better."
"I had never used an editing service before. I must admit I was skeptical, despite the professional look of your web site, but I was desperate for some sort of advice and decided to give it a shot. I am extremely impressed with the feedback and effort put into the revision, I am looking forward to using this service for the rest of my applications, and I will refer my girlfriend who is also applying to graduate school. This was exactly what I needed!"
"Great job. You really improved the flow and consistency of the essay. I have worked with other editors at [a leading essay editing company], but none were as excellent as you. I am thrilled. Thank you so much!"
"I am impressed! Andrew did an incredible job on my essay, and I was able to submit the revised draft without making a single change. My edited essay will definitely improve my chances. Thank you so much!"
"I just wanted to thank you again for your help. You were surprisingly good at maintaining my tone while vastly improving the essay. Ha ha, at first I thought you didn't change anything. But then when I opened the Word document showing the changes, I was amazed at how many improvements you made. I was so impressed by how far my essay has come."
"I was thrilled to see the difference between my original essay and the "after" essay. The improvement is tremendous, and the critique was most helpful in helping me understand the strengths and weaknesses of my first draft. I really needed a strong statement of purpose that would demonstrate my desire and commitment as a grad student, and I feel much more confident in my chances now. I will certainly recommend your service to my friends. Thank you!"
"Andrew is an excellent editor. I wish I had used this service for my first round of applications."
"I am so excited with my final essays--I never thought they could be this good. A well written personal statement is an essential part of the application process, and I believe your service has greatly improved my chances. Thank you very much!"
"Andy made my essay literally perfect! His improvements to my tone, flow and content made a huge difference, and I am so pleased!"
"Andy turned my excellent essay into an exceptional one. I couldn't be more satisfied. Excellent work, and thank you!"
"I was amazed by the quality of my revised essay. Andy helped organize my thoughts when he doesn't even know me! Now that's impressive. I would recommend this service to anyone."
"All I have to say about the revised edits is WOWWWWWWWW!!! Thank you so so very much. I love my revised essays. Just love reading them over and over again!! Once again, thank you for the amazing thing you did to the essays."
"Thank you so much for your edit of my medical application personal statement. I thought it was pretty good when I sent it, but the improvements you've made have really amazed me and my amateur editing crew (friends and family). I just had to tell you that you are at the top of my list of favorite people, Andy Benton."
"Thank you for your comments and revisions. Your attention to the length, the mechanics, and the tone of my essays has greatly refined them. In addition, I think you have picked up on a few issues with my general writing style that I can improve."
"Hi Andy, you have done an amazing job and my hat is off to salute you. The edited version was condensed and yet, as you wrote, can very effectively convey the key points about her attributes. Thanks again for a wonderful job."
"All the essays now read excellent. I cannot believe the amount of redundancy I had in my writing."
"I have been admitted into Kellogg. Thank You for your help with my Essays. Please let me know if I can be of any assistance."
