"Andrew was dead-on with his editing and critique.  He approached this as if he was on the admissions committee, and he is clearly quite skilled as an advisor and editor.  ...best of all, the quality, structure and focus of my essays is much improved.  Many thanks for a job well done."
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Professional editing and consulting services for college and graduate school essays

As an admissions consultant with years of experience, Andrew has helped scores of applicants to colleges, Ph.D. programs, and everything in between attend their top-choice schools.

Following his graduation from Stanford University with a BA in Economics, Andrew worked for a start-up software firm where he managed the multi-million-dollar launch of a new e-commerce product, then served as Marketing Program Manager in the company's new business unit.  After writing his first screenplay and signing with representation, he moved to Los Angeles where he has worked on several writing assignments and rewrites for major studios and production companies.  

In 2001, Andrew began working as a freelance admissions consultant, using his unique mix of marketing and writing experience to help his clients identify their personal brands and tell their stories in the most distinctive and compelling way possible.

Whether advising future attorneys, physicians, or Ph.D.s, Andrew believes that every successful application depends on two key ingredients: effective marketing and refined storytelling.

"Great job.  You really improved the flow and consistency of the essay.  I have worked with other editors at [a leading essay editing company], but none were as excellent as you.  I am thrilled.  Thank you so much!"

"I was thrilled to see the difference between my original essay and the "after" essay.  The improvement is tremendous, and the critique was most helpful in helping me understand the strengths and weaknesses of my first draft.  I really needed a strong statement of purpose that would demonstrate my desire and commitment as a grad student, and I feel much more confident in my chances now.  I will certainly recommend your service to my friends.  Thank you!"

"Your editing made the essay come together.  Thank you!  I feel like you removed a vise from my head."

"I am so excited with my final essays--I never thought they could be this good.  A well written personal statement is an essential part of the application process, and I believe your service has greatly improved my chances.  Thank you very much!"

"Andy made my essay literally perfect!  His improvements to my tone, flow and content made a huge difference, and I am so pleased!"

"Andy turned my excellent essay into an exceptional one.  I couldn't be more satisfied.  Excellent work, and thank you!"

"I was amazed by the quality of my revised essay.  Andy helped organize my thoughts when he doesn't even know me!  Now that's impressive.  I would recommend this service to anyone."

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